This is a good start to the annotated bibliography. But you need to include you revised thesis statement in this part of the project. Also, you need to make some minor corrections, in the two second entries, to the MLA documentations. Please consult The Little Penguin Handbook. Lastly, while your summaries are quite strong, your assessments need work and so do your reflections. Reflections must include specific examples, quotes and make connections between all three sources.
This is a good start to the annotated bibliography. But you need to include you revised thesis statement in this part of the project. Also, you need to make some minor corrections, in the two second entries, to the MLA documentations. Please consult The Little Penguin Handbook. Lastly, while your summaries are quite strong, your assessments need work and so do your reflections. Reflections must include specific examples, quotes and make connections between all three sources.
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