Friday, April 29, 2011

First Draft of Research Paper

**First Draft of Research Paper**
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**Proposal and Preliminary Thesis**
Proposal and Preliminary Thesis

** Part II of Research Paper #1: Revised Preliminary Thesis and Annotated Bibliography**
Part 2 of Research Paper

Hello Miss B I did not go to class today because I did not have the first draft done so I thought there would be no point.

I also have a couple of questions which I hope you can answer:
What do you mean by the revised thesis?
Can I still have the Peer Review online? Can I share the document with someone and they make can leave comments in the documents? ( Just like we did in class)
Also I have not got any feedback from my research advisor but here is the link you can see my comments
http://lrc1031491spring2011.ning.com/profiles/comment/list?attachedToType=User&attachedTo=08z6bvnglxgdt&commentId=6379845%3AComment%3A3002&xg_source=activity
Am I missing anything else?

Thank You very much.

3 comments:

  1. You need to revise your thesis, or strengthen your thesis as you do your research and complete each part of the project. Ultimately, your thesis needs to fully reflect what your paper is about. As you did not attend class on Friday, you missed the peer review and there is no make up for this(i.e. you'll not receive credit for the peer review). But you should ask someone to review your work and give your feedback. As long as you made an attempt to contact the research adviser, I'll give you the extra credit. If you want to know whether you are missing any assignments, you should review your grades document in google docs, the research paper 1 assignment and the syllabus. Remember to post a question about Coltrane's reading on Tues. before 5pm on the class blog.

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  2. Failing to complete your work is not an excuse to miss class. Where is your blog post #8? Where is your outline and revised thesis for Research paper #1?

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  3. Sorry Johnn, you are assigned to post a question on the next reading not Coltrane. My bad :(

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